下弦月的樂章

這篇作文寫了兩次XDDD

就算寫了兩次也還是沒有好很多ｗ

但這種類型的題目真的算普遍吧～

提示：高中三年生活，身為學生的你大部分的時間都投注於課業及學校的活動。什麼事是你想在畢業這一年的暑假去做，但可能父母親不太贊成的。請寫一篇至少120個單詞的英文作文。文分兩段，第一段說明你想做的事是什麼，為什麼你父母親不太贊成。第二段說明你會如何說服父母親接受。

     When it comes to the thing that I want to do after graduating from senior high school, the scenery of spectacular beach and ocean suddenly flashes into my mind. I would like to go to Kenting with my friends this summer. Imagining the clear ocean shining under the sun and the hot sand roasting our toes always makes me feel exciting and look forward to the journey; nevertheless, my parents may not agree on my plan. Since it will be my first tour without any adult beside, my parents may worry about my safety and disapprove my plan. Hence, I have come up with some methods to persuade them. 

     The methods I have come up with are as follows. First of all, I have to prove them that I have the ability to take care of myself. I should be more responsible in my daily life in order to tell them that I am more mature than before. In the second place, I will ask my parents what they are worrying about and discuss how I can do to prove them. Last but not least, I will tell my parents that when I go traveling, I will keep in touch with them, letting them need not to worry about my safety. It might be hard to accomplish this mission; nonetheless, I will do my best to persuade them and leave no regrets in my life. 

這篇其實有點中風文跡象哈哈哈XDD所以分數只有15分

主要是我的論點有點太淺太單薄

像這篇就只有講到人身安全的部分，其實要考慮的點還有很多，像是金錢方面啦之類的

但因為我只有想到人身安全，所以就算寫了三點，實際上看起來還是只有一點而已ｗ