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這篇印象中也是查了不少單字w

還有用了一些一個英文老師很喜歡的詞


提示:人的生活中,難免有遭人誤解因而感到委屈的時候。請以此為主題,寫一篇至少120字的英文作文;第一段描述個人被誤解的經驗,第二段談這段經驗對個人的影響與啟示。

     It is misunderstanding in our lives that makes us feel uneasy and anxious at times. To me, I had an experience of being misunderstood before, which still cast a shadow in the depth of my heart nowadays. I had mental issue in my second year of senior high school. What attributed to this puzzle were indifference of fellowship, breakup with one of my best friends, and so on. The mental issue swallowed me, and I was totally in the mist, not being able to see the leading light in the dark track of my life. What's worse, instead of concerning me, my mother scolded me, as she regarded me as being pretentious ill with a view to winning my parents' attention. In the course of time, her miscomprehension left me sticking in the deep abyss and could hardly climb out. 

     Fortunately, thanks to another best friend's helping hand and some pills, I got rid of my subject. This experience has two influences on me, which are as follows. One is that my mother's misinterpretation resulted from my lack of sharing my daily life; hence, I try to share what I encountered with my parents. The other is that when I meet with someone miring themselves like me in the past, I will put myself in his or her shoes and give him or her encouragement. Since sharing and empathy are the keys to preventing from being misconstrued, we should broaden our minds and be willing to help others, and also find out the truth. Let's break the wall of misunderstanding and make a better world! 


這篇當時寫得很急(不曉得為何w),所以錯了很多細碎的東西,像是忘了加ing或是s之類的

給第一個老師改他很快掃過去是17分,後來我拿給常改的老師改,他說沒有這麼高w大概16分左右吧

然後就是這篇他跟我講中風文的事情XD

因為他很驚訝我寫的內容就問說是不是真的,接著就講了「對吧~寫自己的事情就會很好寫,寫假的就像中風一樣」XDDD

 

 

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