下弦月的樂章

這篇是學測的看圖說故事題的樣子

是去上高二複習班的練習

因為老師說可以自由發揮我就沒有照原本的圖去寫

不然原本的圖是在講貓媽媽為了讓自己的孩子活下去，只好眼睜睜看著小孩把牠小孩抱走

而我自己寫就寫自己的故事這樣

     Well goes the saying, "Mother's love never fades." It is the love from our mom that accompanies us through tough obstacles; yet, I didn't feel the same way until the incident occurred.

     I have heard a story from my mother for several times. She was working in a laboratory when I was just a two-month-old baby. She had no choice but to quit her well-paid job, for no one could take care of me as she had to take part in a critical conference. With the rain pouring down, she held me tightly in her arms, sitting in a taxi with tears rolling down her cheeks. Every time she mentioned this story, I always felt that she was complaining about my birth, which also let me feel like I was the jinx of my family. Hence, each time I was scolded by her, there was a sense of guilt deeply in my heart. Were it not for me, they would have a life without worrying about finance.

     It is not until a similar incident took place did I realize that the truth is not like what I thought. One morning on my way to school, anemia struck me all of a sudden. Hardly could I see the road, so I called my mother for help. Through the fuzzy vision, I saw her run towards me with anxiety on her face. Seeing her have to leave her work behind for me again, I finally understood that in the struggling situation surely stood our moms to secure us. And the story she told to me was a way she said how much she loved me.

     It is no exaggeration to say that mom's love never fails to put us together through ups and downs. Therefore, we cannot appreciate it more, can we?

這篇也是16分

正常考試作文應該是兩段而已，但因為這次自由發揮，我就學老師的範文寫了四段XD

裡面很多句子也是參考老師的範文寫來的，不然我自己應該是寫不出這種句子ｗ

後來跟老師討論過老師有說，像結尾盡量少用問句，舉例的時候也盡量明確一點（some reasons→three reasons類似這種意思）