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這篇也算是前期w但已經開始練習不查字典、不翻筆記了

所以會一直有重複的單字一直出現的狀況w

要寫好就是同樣的單字要抽換歐www


提示:生活中,每個人都有光榮驕傲的時刻,請以此為題,寫一篇文長至少120字的英文作文;第一段描述個人最值得驕傲的一件事,第二段談這件事對個人的影響。

     When it comes to the thing that I am proud of in my life, there is no denying that I would say it is the choice of retaking the JCEE. By no means have I thought of retaking the JCEE until I found what I want to do in the future was not what I was studying in the college. To me, it took a great amount of courage to make the decision. Nevertheless, when I made up my mind to make this choice, a strong feeling of pride flew into my mind. I am really proud of it, since it was the first time that I make a decision for my life. As a result, I will certainly be responsible for it.

     Retaking JCEE has posed two major influences on me. One is that I am more confident and braver than before. It seems that I have the courage to do anything ever after, and I also have the ability to fulfill them. The other is that I become more responsible for myself. I've grown up and that means no turning back, and I have to take responsibility for my life and future. Retaking the JCEE isn't an easy thing to me as I have been far from the high school lessons for nearly two years; yet, as the saying goes, "Aim high, flutter high." I believe that I can reach my expectations for myself, and I am convinced that I will leave no regrets in my life.

1. determine

2. came to a decision

3. came to a resolution

△ accountable


最後那幾個是我去問老師的時候說我一直在用重複的字,所以老師就寫了幾個可以換的字給我XD

這篇有16.5分

我想到老師講的,作文寫自己的事情會比較好寫,不然寫假的事情很容易寫出中風文w

然後這篇最後那句話很好用最好背起來,很多題目的最後一句都可以套這個XD

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