下弦月的樂章

前陣子為了準備重考寫了很多英文作文

最近整理東西就想說把一些可以參考的文章留著

雖然分數實在不怎麼樣ｗ但我覺得對於一個字都寫不出來的人來說應該還是有參考價值的吧我想ｗ

說真的很久沒寫英文作文

一開始我真的是一個字都擠不太出來的那種

但真的多練習還是可以擠出些什麼的

因為我本來設定的標準就沒有很高

所以想寫高分作文的麻煩直接轉向謝謝掰掰

接下來的作文分數大多是15、16分左右（聽說全國平均是12分不知道有沒有聽錯）

紅字是老師改過的部分

提示：年輕人都有自己視為模範的行為榜樣，也就是偶像。請寫一篇大約120—150字的短文。第一段描述你心目中的偶像（如：知名的演藝人員、政商名人，或如本試卷題及之諸位歷史人物），第二段說明你將怎麼做才能達到目標。

     When it comes to the idol in mind, the scene of a man singing a song and playing the guitar on the stage flashes into my mind, and I've always wanted to be an individual as he is. Chris Liao is a Taiwanese singer-songwriter. Different from the other singers' lyrics which are mostly written about relationship, his lyrics are concerned with human frailties, such as depression of failure, disappointment of hope, loneliness in life, to name but a few. He wrote these songs for the purpose of telling the audience that there is always someone who understands your feeling in the world, and we shall share the belief that everything will get better/will be fine. People may take him as an optimist. In fact, he is completely pessimistic. Nevertheless, he faces up to his negative thoughts, converts them into positive faith, and transmits it to others. That is what I admire for.

     To be like him, the following is something I have to do. One is to keep smiling at whatever happens. Since the research confirms that being cheerful can bring good luck, having good luck makes you think the world is pleasant. Another is trying to look on the bright side. As the saying goes, "Stressed is only desserts if you can reverse." The world will turn into a totally different appearance if we do so. The other is being confident in myself. As the bravery comes from one's confidence, I need to trust more in my own abilities so that I can pluck up my courage to confront with anything. If I can accomplish above-mentioned condition, I will do what my idol has done, spreading hope to others through the thing I am good at. How fantastic it will be!

這篇算是前期寫的ｗ就是非常大量的查字典、翻資料擠出來的作文

這樣寫大概會有16分左右

我自己練作文的方法是，一開始就先慢慢寫，先用中文擬好要寫什麼，不會寫的就查，就算一整篇都用查出來的也沒關係，反正是剛開始練習嘛～

上課學到的文法、片語、佳句我有準備一本小筆記本記下來，中文稿擬好之後我會想英文要怎麼寫，就會一邊想句子一邊翻筆記本，把一些平常想的到的直述句換個句型帶入

然後查不會的單字的部分，同樣意思的單字我會挑比較不常見但又不會太難的單字，因為挑出來寫的單字是要記的、是以後再寫到的時候會用到的，所以不挑太常見、早就會的，也不要挑太難的為難自己，到時候背錯反而弄巧成拙

這樣的模式大概寫個三篇左右就可以試著盡量不要查字典、翻筆記，有些常用的句子（像是開頭的When it comes to……或是列點的First of all……等等）寫久了就會記得了，再來就剩想辦法不要寫太簡單太常見的單字這樣

目前只想到這些，看後面幾篇有什麼問題我在想想～