下弦月的樂章

印象中寫這篇之前有寫過新聞相關的作文，就有寫過鄭捷事件，但那篇沒有寫很好

結果遇到這個題目又要再寫新聞orz，所以就換了一個新聞來寫

但還是沒有寫好就是了orz，真的不太會寫實事

提示：近年來，新聞媒體常常報導一些令人震驚和遺憾的事件，請一律以"But it was too late for regrets."為結尾句，敘述一件你聽聞過令人感到痛惜的社會事件，主人翁可以是新聞事件報導出來的人物或你認識的人。請適當分為二或三段撰寫。

     It is a piece of news that gives the public a great shock and makes the public into rage. A few months ago, a little girl was riding a bicycle following her mother. It had to be a pleasant day for the mother and child; yet, the girl's bicycle was stuck on the road and a man came to the girl. The mother regarded that the man was going to help; nevertheless, the man raised a knife in his hand and attacked the little girl. The mother tried to rescue her daughter but failed. The little girl died in a miserable situation. Despite that the man has been arrested, it can't bring the angel back to her mother and ease/subside the anger from the public. 

     This stunning incident brings up plenty of issues worthed discussion. One is that how come it happened. If the little girl had ridden a bike in front of her mother, the incident might not have occurred. Another is the factors that lead this society to nurture such a monstrous criminal as he is. Our education may needs to change as well as parents' teaching methods. If the man had been well educated by his family, the little girl might not have died/been slaughtered. The other is that what precautions we can take to prevent the same occurrence from happening anew. After all, an innocent life was taken away by the evil hand of a monster, but it was too late for regrets.

這篇也是粗心錯了很多所以16.5分

內容尤其是第二段看看就好，因為考試的時候總是沒時間思考寫很急常常亂寫，第二段很多想法都只是為了湊內容出來寫的，所以不是很正確的觀念，真的看看就好

而且真的是沒時間才那樣寫ｗ不然其實這樣的寫法（不是指觀念是指內容）是不正確的，應該要寫一些能具體實施的方法，而不是像我寫的這樣如果怎樣就不會怎樣

所以最後一句我在寫的時候就被老師說感覺不太連接，像是硬加上去的ｗ

最後就整句都被老師改掉ｗ

像這種指定句子的作文很重視邏輯，印象中以前學測模擬考也是有類似的題目，它是一張圖片，圖中是一個明顯是小學生的男生和一個20歲左右的女人在高級餐廳用餐，女生講了句話意思是我以為你（小男孩）年紀更大

那篇寫出來很多人都被老師罵，首先就是那句話一定要寫進作文裡，再來就是邏輯的問題，故事要怎麼編排都要符合邏輯，比如說對方是個小男孩，就不太可能講出什麼或做出什麼過於成熟的事情

類似這樣的題目都要仔細思考會不會哪裡怪怪的再寫