下弦月的樂章

最後一篇作文了，這篇也是去上高二班的練習，而且那時候距離指考不到一個月了

看到這個題目真的沒有很想認真寫ｗｗｗ（因為看起來就明顯不是考試會出的題目啊ｗ）

但還是很努力的擠了出來這樣XD只是第二段很不想思考就大量的參考了老師範文（喂）

     Getting a place at NTUA to study Graphic Communication Arts has long been my dream since adolescence. I was indefatigably looking for a stage where I can learn design, photography, and publishing. Since I went to one of their exhibitions, I have passionately come to a decision to enroll in NTUA at any cost. Their professional techniques, proposed ideas, and firm confidence revealing from the students' eyes, in particular, let me convinced that this is the platform I have fancied for a long time. As a consequence, I make up my mind to win the upcoming battle.

     To gain such goal, I have a variety of brand new strategies which are as follows. First of all, a well-arranged studying plan will make certain that I can keep up with my schedule of reviewing so that I can be fully prepared for the combat. In the second place, adjusting myself to proper sleeping habit will keep me in a splendid condition to face all the obstacles. What's more, regular exercise as well as a balanced diet also plays an important role. Last but not least, it is vital for me to remain an optimistic attitude. Since the research has confirmed that being delightful can bring good luck, the good luck will be a charm assisting me to cope with hardship. Well goes the saying, "Aim high, flutter high." I undoubtedly believe that my perseverance will fly me to the blue bird, and that under no circumstances will I leave regrets in my life.

這篇16分，但不得不說改作文的人大概是助手之類的

比如說像第一段的come to a decision，我在前面某一篇作文有寫了很多英文作文老師寫給我的「下定決心」可以替換的詞，其中有一個就是這個，但改作文的人把它改成made a decision，這當然是可以的，但自己想想，如果自己是改作文的人，看到兩個學生分別這樣寫，你會給誰比較高的分數呢？（我們老師常常這樣問我們，我覺得這是一個很好測試哪個詞比較好的方法）

還有第二段的studying plan，我記得老師上課有講過，study是research，studying才是讀書，但改的人把它改成了study plan

大概這樣吧，不過很多句子是參考老師寫的，所以還是值得參考XD